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Member Since: May 11, 2010
Kate Beckett goes to rescue a very drunk Richard Castle on New Years Eve. No adult content but I hope a bit of humour. Feedback would be appreciated
Categories: Humour Characters: Kate Beckett, Richard Castle
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3169 Read Count: 4324
I had a smile on my face all the way through this. Castle would be a very cute drunk. Would love to actually see this on the show. In a blue sweater and leather jacket. Fun dialogue, too. "because I'm too drunk to drive." Obviously.
Thanks for writing it.
A curious detective, a spontaneous date and maybe a little too much wine.
Categories: Romance Characters: Kate Beckett, Richard Castle
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8142 Read Count: 6245
Really impressive. You have a gift for dialogue and banter that sounds just like the characters. Everything rings true. Hope we are lucky enough to get some scenes like this eventually. (And I am so glad that Castle is as good in bed as I had imagined.)
BTW, thrilled with the good grammar and spelling. Thank You.
Its summer and Richard Castle is thinking about how things were going.
SPOILERS! For the love of God there are spoilers in here from the season finale! If you haven’t seen the videos then just move along for your own sake! :D
Categories: Drama Characters: Alexis Castle, Javier Esposito, Kate Beckett, Kevin Ryan, Lanie Parish, Martha Rodgers, Richard Castle, Roy Montgomery
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22407 Read Count: 4145
In my opinion, you are the best writer posting here, and I have really, really enjoyed your stories so very much. You have the characters' voices down, great imagination and vocabulary. That said, I hope you don't mind if I mention that you could use a proof reader to make your story perfect- grammar, syntax and spelling wise. (The use of to and too) "How was she suppose to know" should read, "How was she supposed to know" (the use of set and sat for the beer bottles...) Please, don't be offended, you are very, very good. But two eyes are better than one, generally speaking. I know that I have sent off emails that I wish had been proof read.
I guess that I'm offering, if you are interested. Don't really know how to do this though; new to this site.
Thank you so much for the kind words, I'm so glad that you've enjoyed my work. I'm not offended at all, grammer is something I've always struggled with some but I'm much better than I use to be and I'm always trying to improve. And you're right, two eyes are better than one as I'm usually too close to the story that I read over the mistakes, (I've tried to remedy this by having my computer read it back to me and it's helped some, lol).
For the most part these stories were written in about two hours with a quick edit because I figured most wouldn't read it (foolish I know... since I'm putting it out there on the internet lots are gonna take a look, lol). I was surprise that so many people enjoyed my stuff so I'm taking my time on the next story.
I'm working on a new story now, so if you're interested in being a beta reader for me you can shoot me an email at firstname.lastname@example.org. I'd really appreciate the help! :D
Thanks again for the offer and for reading and reviewing. :D